Thursday, December 1, 2016

story starters


If mum and I switched places I would have to clean the dishes , cook dinner, do the vacuuming, do the shopping and make the beds.  If mum was me she would  be in glory, she would go to school and play with my friend Manaia, do games with the teacher and  learn while I’m at home doing all the work.If she comes home being very cheeky  and gossiping about what she did at school. She will feel as lucky as can be.I will do something very cheeky to her I will make her do her lunch every day, pick up the dog poo , clean the toilet and wipe the floors.Hahahaha

Thursday, September 22, 2016

my poems

All my great excuses
I started on my homework
but my pen ran out of ink.
My hamster ate my homework.
My computer’s on the blink.
I accidentally dropped it
in the soup my mom was cooking.
My brother flushed it down the toilet
when I wasn’t looking.
My mother ran my homework
through the washer and the dryer.
An airplane crashed into our house.
My homework caught on fire.
Tornadoes blew my notes away.
Volcanoes struck our town.
My notes were taken hostage
by an evil killer clown.
Some aliens abducted me.
I had a shark attack.
A pirate swiped my homework
and refused to give it back.
I worked on these excuses
so darned long my teacher said,
“I think you’ll find it’s easier
to do the work instead.”

What I like about this poem.
I like that this poem has lots of excuses for homework.
I like that this poem has full stop yand capital letters .
I like that this poem has rhymes`

   
                    I got some hot sauce

I got some hot sauce in my eye.
It caused a painful tear.
I showed it to my mom and she said,
“That’s a bad eye, dear.”
--Kenn Nesbitt
What i like about this poem.
i like the good description of this poem.i like the good funny jokes.




                 Joe the emoji
          I’m Joe the Emoji.
I when I’m glad.
I when I’m angry.
I when I’m sad.
Whenever I’m silly
my goes like this.
I if I like you,
or blow you a .
I when I’m tired.
I when afraid.
I have the most flexible
ever made.
I hope that you me
and don’t think I’m rude.
I’m Joe the Emoji.
I’m one dude.
--Kenn Nesbitt
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What i like about this poem.
I like the good emoji they used in this poem.
I liked the good descriptions.

My 3 poems

At the beach
dolphins are blue, whales are dark blue, do you know what ,I do
love blue

The sea
When you walk into the water you feel relaxed. As you go in deeper a wave clashes in to you.

The sand
When you walk on the sand it burns into the your feet, it feels really hot…..Ahhh!  

Thursday, September 15, 2016

Autobiography Poem

Victoria
 Tall ,brown eyes, brown and black hair 
 2 brothers and 2 sisters Materina,Chance,Himiona and Daniel. 
I love my godson Rycheous, my god dad and god mum 
 I feel good working with Nic 
 I need to spend more time with my Nan and Papa 
I give love to my family
 I fear the ocean I would like to see Disney land
 My dream is to live with my godparents and godson  
I'm a student of Frimley School 
Vicky