story starters

If mum and I switched places I would have to clean the dishes , cook dinner, do the vacuuming, do the shopping and make the beds.  If mum was me she would  be in glory, she would go to school and play with my friend Manaia, do games with the teacher and  learn while I’m at home doing all the work.If she comes home being very cheeky  and gossiping about what she did at school. She will feel as lucky as can be.I will do something very cheeky to her I will make her do her lunch every day, pick up the dog poo , clean the toilet and wipe the floors.Hahahaha

my poems

All my great excuses

I started on my homework

but my pen ran out of ink.

My hamster ate my homework.

My computer’s on the blink.

I accidentally dropped it

in the soup my mom was cooking.

My brother flushed it down the toilet

when I wasn’t looking.

My mother ran my homework

through the washer and the dryer.

An airplane crashed into our house.

My homework caught on fire.

Tornadoes blew my notes away.

Volcanoes struck our town.

My notes were taken hostage

by an evil killer clown.

Some aliens abducted me.

I had a shark attack.

A pirate swiped my homework

and refused to give it back.

I worked on these excuses

so darned long my teacher said,

“I think you’ll find it’s easier

to do the work instead.”

What I like about this poem.

I like that this poem has lots of excuses for homework.

I like that this poem has full stop yand capital letters .

I like that this poem has rhymes`

   

                    I got some hot sauce

I got some hot sauce in my eye.

It caused a painful tear.

I showed it to my mom and she said,

“That’s a bad eye, dear.”

--Kenn Nesbitt

What i like about this poem.

i like the good description of this poem.i like the good funny jokes.

                 Joe the emoji

          I’m Joe the Emoji.

I when I’m glad.

I when I’m angry.

I when I’m sad.

Whenever I’m silly

my goes like this.

I if I like you,

or blow you a .

I when I’m tired.

I when afraid.

I have the most flexible

ever made.

I hope that you me

and don’t think I’m rude.

I’m Joe the Emoji.

I’m one dude.

--Kenn Nesbitt

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What i like about this poem.

I like the good emoji they used in this poem.

I liked the good descriptions.

My 3 poems

At the beach

dolphins are blue, whales are dark blue, do you know what ,I do

love blue

The sea

When you walk into the water you feel relaxed. As you go in deeper a wave clashes in to you.

The sand

When you walk on the sand it burns into the your feet, it feels really hot…..Ahhh!  

Autobiography Poem

Victoria

 Tall ,brown eyes, brown and black hair 

 2 brothers and 2 sisters Materina,Chance,Himiona and Daniel. 

I love my godson Rycheous, my god dad and god mum 

 I feel good working with Nic 

 I need to spend more time with my Nan and Papa 

I give love to my family

 I fear the ocean I would like to see Disney land

 My dream is to live with my godparents and godson  

I'm a student of Frimley School 

Vicky

Brazil broucher

Victoria 's Video on Friday, 29 July 2016

Victoria's Video on Wednesday, 29 June 2016

bad bad scars

A BAD SCAR

A brave brave warrior suffered through staples in her leg, that brave brave warrior was my sister.  My sister works at AMI insurance in Auckland Manukau City.  

One day  my sister was late to work.  She ran into work very fast.  “AAH  she slipped over.  She was  screaming  as loud as she could.  A lady saw it happen and went to help.  She told  another lady to call 111. My sister’s  boyfriend had just left from dropping her off to work.  They got my sisters phone and rang him. He came rushing back in feeling so bad for her. He tried to help her but he couldn't. The ambulance arrived and they lifted her in into the ambulance very carefully.  Her boyfriend Anthony followed the ambulance to the hospital in their truck.  She had a dislocated knee. I think that means that her knee bone had moved.  They put staples in her leg.

I lived with my sister  for 6 months. When I left I was really sad and I was crying all night. I couldn’t forgive my Mum for saying we’re moving out.  I didn't see my sister for ages. The last time I saw her the scar was really really fat but now it is smooth and has gone down.  She can walk now.

When it happened she was given  her own special toilet to use at home which had a bucket underneath the chair.  I called it a chair toilet with a bucket underneath.                  

Victoria 's Video on Wednesday, 15 June 2016

Victoria 's Video on Friday, 10 June 2016

Term 2 goals

Writing goals

I want to improve in having full stops.

I want to improve in doing capital letters.

I want to improve in writing neatly

Easter

NARATIVE